3rd quarter 2nd blog

The main character has now freed all the slaves from the wood tower. As they get ready to for the run they send a single to the archers to shoot the fire arrows. But they didn't, the guards are all out side the tower and its most likely they will see. But then one of them, who said he could speck to the sprites said that fire will come if he uses the steel from his sword and the piece of flint he had. It indeed worked. She said that she talked to the sprite of steel and fire. As she smashed the two together sparked flew all across the wooden towers floor. It went into a blaze all the slaves ran. As they where running the girl had gotten surrounded. As he looked back yelling her name, she looked calm and cool and she walked threw the fire and she didn't even catch fire. For she had spoken to the sprites. 

I thought this part was amazing. They used a lot of detail. I could write so much more, I like how this book real shows how the book looks and how it helps you imagine everything. Theirs also a good amount of suspense, or at least from what I read so far.